Whatever you do, please do not make future chapters anything less than the class act you have created thus far. Not a ton of them, but they are there and unfortunately are bothersome enough to cause the reader to be pulled away from the great story you are telling.ΔΆ. You gotta get an editor to clean up some of the typos/spelling/sentence sense issues. You got me caring about all of your characters because you made them more than sex objects, though you sure spared no expense in making nearly all gorgeous, both females and males. A story not focused on some silly degenerate protagonist no one really cares about. Second to none renders - Being a DiK is a distant second place! Close ups and distant shots appropriately used for effect/mood. You have proven that point-of-view, sexy characters with depth and attention to detail, and slow burn development can be better than a pure fap fantasy. Wow, who says you need to drench a story in sex scenes for the story to be sexy.
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